New Website...give me feedback

[AndrewMendez]

I just finished the basics of my website. I used a template provided by my company, and have done a fair amount of tweaking to it.

The website is www.AgentMendez.com (I know, Incognito Fail)

Feedback on it would be great. What do you like, what needs improvement (besides my bio, still working on that) What would you think if you were a potential client looking for information.

The only thing I can't figure out is how to post a counter in it...suggestions would be great. I tried a few HTML codes, and they all just show the code on the live page.

If you have your own site, I would be happy to return the favor.

Thanks

AM.

[pacifico23]

I would post a few pictures. One of yourself, and maybe of a house ith a "sold" sign in front or something. Just to color it up a bit. Also the tables just seem funky. Try spacing it out a little more. It seems most of the link are jumbled up parralell to that search feature. Also of course make sure to include contact info.

Other than that, looking prety good!

[AndrewMendez]

I am taking my professional photo Monday, should have it up by the end of the week. I can't edit the side links, but I do think their are too many of them. I will be doing away with some of them. That's a great idea about the for sale sign. I will take one with my sign in front of a nice house with me standing next to it.

[AndrewMendez]

47 views and only 1 person leaving feedback?!!?

[Got Stuff?]

Not bad. Search feature took a little getting used to but seemed to function well.

[the_natterjack]

No Fancy Punchlines- Just Great Service needs a space after Punchlines and before the hyphen. I really don't like that head line.

The paragraph "Different by design" needs more text. Talk a little more about your great personal service. Exactly what is it? Insert a photograph of you with a customer, providing great service. Text should wrap around photo.

The paragraph "Whats Different about a Keller Williams Agent?" Your using a bullet point but you have only one point, Knowledge. Expound on whats different. Three bullet points would be good.

The paragraph "How we can help" Starts by thanking the user. Rewrite and tell them how you WILL help them. Maybe another photo to balance the first photograph.

Sign the bottom with a signature, like it's a letter or better yet a contract with your customer. It goes with the formal theme of the Keller Williams logo. Don't use your own signature!

[AndrewMendez]

Got stuff....yeah I am working with an IT guy about the search function. Thanks.

The Natter jack, what would look better as a headline? Do you just not like the "no fancy punchlines" quote, which is in fact a punch line in itself? Or do you not like the way it looks period?

Everything else is great. I will get to working on it tomorrow evening. I greatly appreciate it the advice.

[freonr22]

sorry, under featured properties, (had to select us not default instead of canada alberta... fot $438,000,000 and $48,000,000 i would want more detail and pics...

http://www.mlsfinder.com/kwls/kw/index.cfm?action=listing_detail&property_id=1343109614&searchkey=46e642b9-90c6-927e-3b01-ae08223be319&npp=8&sr=1

http://www.mlsfinder.com/kwls/kw/index.cfm?action=listing_detail&property_id=1883C10094406&searchkey=46e642b9-90c6-927e-3b01-ae08223be319&npp=8&sr=1

[AndrewMendez]

sorry, under featured properties, (had to select us not default instead of canada alberta... fot $438,000,000 and $48,000,000 i would want more detail and pics...

http://www.mlsfinder.com/kwls/kw/index.cfm?action=listing_detail&property_id=1343109614&searchkey=46e642b9-90c6-927e-3b01-ae08223be319&npp=8&sr=1

http://www.mlsfinder.com/kwls/kw/ind...319&npp=8&sr=1

That came up under my featured properties!??!? That is supposed to link to my offices listings.....hmmmmm.

[freonr22]

andselected calif properties btw

[AndrewMendez]

Interesting. I don't think the second link is the correct price. Seems they added a few extra zero's.

[nick]

I don't see Laguna Hills or Laguna Beach in the list of areas.

[AndrewMendez]

Wow, that search thing is really off. That's a major turn off. I don't have too much ability to change the options on that, other then what the page says. I wonder whats up with the Orange, Orange County, ORRANGE, etc all for Orange County. Are you guys able to see that too? It looks almost as if someone searched for the counties like that.

[nick]

There were a few more spelling mistakes in that list of cities.

[AndrewMendez]

I will call the IT guys. There are 10's of thousands of Keller Williams Agents using the site, I wonder why it has not been addressed yet.